字数:200满分:100分
作者词汇基础扎实;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
As is vividly manifested in the drawing above,an individual is running,his body tired and a host of sweats dropping.Instead of ceasing to advance,he continues to run.Under the cartoon reads 'destination is a start line too'. The potential meaning of the cartoon aims to remind us of the importance of lifelong learning.As we are stepped into a new era-'explosion of knowledge',the lifelong learning is deemed as an indispensable ingredient to a successful life,which is doomed to yield great returns.Although learning in daily life looks like a trivial thing,it often occurs that a single unimportant event set up a chain of reactions which will bridge the enormous gap between dream and reality.On the contrary,if we are invariably intoxicated with past achievements and reputations,chances are that we cease to be in the possession of sufficient knowledge to enhance ourselves,let alone to be the backbone of our country. Take Yangzhengning,an eminent physicist who achieves great success in his field,as an example,he views 'the lifelong learning' as an essential part in his life and often works day and night,which is why he wins the Nobel prize during his day and is popularize the whole world.Undoutly,the more time we spend on learning,the more likely that we will get access to success.How magnificent our life would be were we willing to study without ceasing.