北京西城区2012届九年级上学期期末试卷英语作文

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Dear Tony: I am happy to receive the letter from you.I will try my best to answer your question.First, I think your teather asks your to work in groups has nothing wrong.But I think you should believe your classmates before doing anything together. You should ask your classmates to help you with a loyal heart.I hope your question will be solved. Yours Mary