2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'm very glard that my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown .At my hometown there are many beautiful place woth to visit.The most interesting place is west lack ,i'll take him to see it if he come here.Because west lack is most famous place in my hometown ,every one of us have heard a loving story about Bai su zhen and Xu xian .While you are go around the west lack ,you can see leifeng tower ,which has a long history,convincing the developmnt of my hometown.i am very pround of it.