2013年考研英语作文预测话题：诚实

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法基础较为扎实；文章词汇词汇丰富度和学术词汇使用熟练度都要继续努力，还要注意单词拼写；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon,occupying the half sphere called earth is a great number of factories "breathing" vigorously,while the humans all are struggling to escape from these horrible monster expiring,forced to leave it seems that.A crack in the middle implys a endangered earth,spreaded on by black contaminated water.