2013年考研英语作文预测话题：诚实

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法基础较为扎实；文章词汇词汇丰富度和学术词汇使用熟练度都要继续努力，还要注意单词拼写；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon,occupying the half sphere called earth is a great number of factories "breathing" vigorously,while the humans all are struggling to escape from these horrible monster expiring,forced to leave it seems that.A crack in the middle implys an endangered earth,spreaded on by black contaminated water.