2013年考研英语作文预测话题：诚实

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法基础较为扎实；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon,occupying the half sphere called earth is a great number of factories "breathing" vigorously,while the humans all are struggling to escape from these horrible monsters expiring,forced to leave it seems that.A crack in the middle suggests an endangered earth,spread on by black contaminated water.