2013年考研英语作文预测话题：诚实

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；文章层次较为清晰；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon,occupying the half sphere called earth is a great number of factories "breathing" vigorously,while the humans all are struggling to escape from these horrible monsters expiring,forced to leave it seems that.A crack in the middle suggests an endangered earth,spread on by contaminated water.What a pathetic and heart-rending scene!