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3． 开头语已为你写好。
上下文衔接稍显不流畅；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇，以及部分学术词汇，单词拼写也要仔细。
I finished work on time recently. Because boss has returned home with his family, for his fathers' birthday. And I could do what I want to do, such as watching series movies called The vimpire, or studying English. I noticed that I will improve a little or learn something when I am in WEB. For instance, I wrote a composition to Georgia yesterday. I went there and found her was not in WEB，but Peter was in couseware lab, so I was brave to ask him some question(ectually someone talked with him, and I was mad that I was afraid to talk with him). After a small conversation, I took the composition and asked him to help revise. Shorter afterwards, he not only correct it but also read to me whether it had been revised. I was so exctied on the way.this was the first time to have a longest talking with foreigner, and I realized I am not a idiot. by the time, I was sadness the couseware, because I accidently to turn the computer off and it did not keep the record what I have done. What a wonderful day!
