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假如上周末你和班上的同学到方山玩得很快乐。请以My happy weekend 为题，根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
5. 大家都渡过了一个快乐的周末。
4. 不得用真实姓名和学校名称。
文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；请注意分段。
My happy weekend Last weekend, my classmate and I went to Fangshan. It was so interesting. At 8:00 on Sunday morning, we got together at the school gate. When everyone arrived, we started. We liked riding, se we went there by bike. After about 30 minutes’ ride, we got there. We found a beautiful place to have a rest. And we took many beautiful photos and played games together. When we felt a little hungry, we took out our food to have a picnic. Everyone ate a lot. We all had a happy weekend.
