2013年考研英语作文预测话题：诚实

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As is symbolically portrayed in the cartoon,occupying the half sphere called earth is a great number of factories "breathing" vigorously,while the humans all are struggling to escape from these horrible monsters expiring,forced to leave it seems that.A crack in the middle suggests an endangered earth,spread on by,contaminated water.What a pathetic and heart-rending scene! The most vivid depiction of the painting as it is presented is a hot talk of environmental conservation.The occurence has been surfacing since the industrialization picks up,environment suffers great destroying.on the one hand,the resoure exploited without restrictions has remained little.