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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3372
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分89.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用学术词汇;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

As is symbolically portrayed in the cartoon,occupying the half sphere called earth is a great number of factories "breathing" vigorously,while the humans all are struggling to escape from these horrible monsters expiring,forced to leave it seems that.A crack in the middle suggests an endangered earth,spread on by,contaminated water.What a pathetic and heart-rending scene! The most vivid depiction of the painting as it is presented is a hot talk of environmental conservation.The occurence has been surfacing since the industrialization picks up,environment suffers great destroying.On the one hand,the resource exploited without restrictions has remained little,which attributes to mankind's irrational and unscientific concept of development.On another,“the pollution” posted is threatening our daily life. For my part,there is no doubt that we indeed step into a better life as the advent of industrialization.

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