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At comtemporary society, the environment on Earth is getting worse while there are more people on this planet. Some scholars maintain that it is very late if peole want to do something to change this situation. However, others have an opposite point of view that if people take the right way, humans are not the negative influence to this problem. Entering the new century, there are lots of disasters happen in the world. For example, the earthquake and ice-cap. These kinds of disasters make animals lose their home and have nothing to eats to support their lives, even some species are disappeard, such as Dudu. Human beings are a big reason that lead this happens. Now, the population of the whole world is more than 7 billion and all individuals should have food and clothes to use daily. Some people wants to earn more money so that they kill animals to get their fur to make colourful coats to sell. That leads animals species gets smaller. Although some people thinks it is too late, many people think that useful tools can improve the situation better. Nowadays, there are many teams of environment that finding a better way for animals and plants to live. They may get the best method to change the horrible situation. Some zookeepers return some of the animals in the zoo to nature and get the animals a better space to generate to help the animals species. Governments start to write new laws for the plants and animals, such as don't allow people to cut dowm trees and hunt animals, to decrease the negetive effects. In my opinion, I believe that if citizens have the same dream and put enough time on the situation, the plants and animal species will not disappear although there is a large amount of people. To achieve this dream, all members of the big family should do their duties: stop cut down trees, don't buy clothes which made of animals' furs and find a good place for them to live.
