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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。
Entering the second decade of new century, there are lots of new technologies are entirely popular, such as television and computer so the quality of news spreading is increasing. However, the quality of citizens' lives in urbans is declining. With the invention of cars, citizens no longer use bicycle to travel. Driving a car is a common skill for lots of people, but it also causes a lot of problem, for example, traffic jam and pollution. Traffic jam can make workers late for their jobs and pollution will make all the citizens to be unhealthy. With tired and upset minds, residents cannot focus on what they are doing and lead them a downfall of their lives. In many times, they will lose their jobs and make the whole family get upset so that the quality of their daily life are decreasing. To solve these kinds of questions, governments should make new laws, but
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