托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

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Nowadays, lots of people think that win is the most important things when you join in a sport. I, however, think that participating in a sport is worthwhile both win or lose the game. In contemporary society, the competition between people and people is very serious, so many people think that win is the only way to achieve success and accompliment. Fundamentally, it is always correct that come first in a sport competition is a success. The person who comes first can get lots of appluse from others and make him or her a good spirit because he or she can beat so many people to get number one in the hard competition, so everyone think him or her as a successful people. At meantime, I believe that everyone who join in the sport is also a hero and a successful person because they may learn something from their competition. For instance, a students who always be the last person in a run race. Before the race, he may make a goal for improving his speed of run. He practises running everyday and never stop, even sometime he has lots of things to do. Then, he is not the last person in the race. He ought to be satisfied because he does his best and he has a big improvement from his before to now. He is a successful peroson because he never gives up. Therefore, not only the person who wins in the sport is worthwhile, but the person who participate is the winner. As a consequence, a successful person is not concentration on who is the winner of the sport but the person who tries him best is the winner.