2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

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Nowdays,many parents send their kids to art class,such as,painting,writing and so on.They all want their kids to a success people. For this phenomenon,people hold different ideas.Some of them believe send kids to art class,which is right.On the one hand,kids attending art class can rich amateur life.In the other hand children will have more feeling than those who are't sent to art class. As a coin has two sides.The others is oppose to this idea.They think that children are too tired to attend art class.There are many classes in school.In other things,they believe that we should give children right to choose whether does attend the art class or not. As far as I'm concerned,children should are sent to art class with willing.And proper art class for children is benefit.