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新目标(Go for it)版初中英语九年级-Uint5 单元测试写作:有烦恼向谁说?

发布时间:2013-06-26 18:03浏览次数:4643
要求:
提示:假如你叫王平,参加了学校的”有烦恼向谁说?”的调查活动(a survey)。


调查结果:

1、大多数向同学、朋友说(理由:年龄相仿,容易交流和理解)

2、一些向老师、家长说(理由:经验丰富、可以得到帮助)
3、少数自己独立解决(理由:不愿与人交流,难以与人相处)


请你根据中文提示用英语给某报社编辑写一封信(信的开头与结尾已经给出),说明情况并提出你自己的观点。字数60-80词左右,不必逐句翻译,可适当发挥。


Dear Editor,

I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey ----”To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results.
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Yours Sincerely,
                                                                  Wang Ping
用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

The saying that practice makes perfect means that after you have plenty of practice in what you are doing, you will be perfect in it. He who practices a lot will master the skill more quickly than he who seldom or hardly practices. For example, when we learn English, we have to learn grammar, words, expressions and so on. The most important thing may be how to put what we have learned into practice. If you only learn the grammar rules by heart and don't do enough exercises, it is certain that you can't understand them perfectly. But if you practice a lot, maybe you will understand them more fully and you can find some good methods of applying them. Memorizing English words whenever time permits,we can easily memorize them and can even find a way to memorize them more quickly. There is another example. A famous singer can sing very welt. Of course, his talent is very important, but practice is necessary. It is necessary to practice to make the singer sing better and better. It is evident that practice is important for everybody. If you want to improve your study and work, you should remember that practice makes perfect.

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