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假如上周末你和班上的同学到方山玩得很快乐。请以My happy weekend 为题，根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
5. 大家都渡过了一个快乐的周末。
4. 不得用真实姓名和学校名称。
文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
My happy weekend Last weekend, my classmate and I went to Fangshan. It was so interesting. At 8:00 on Sunday morning, we got together at the school gate. When everyone arrived, we started. We liked riding, se we went there by bike. After about 30 minutes’ ride, we got there.We went there about 30 minutes by bike. Then we do a lot of activities,such as take photos,paly games When we felt a little hungry,we have a picnic.Everyone ate a lot. We had a good time at the weekend.
