小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少；连词使用偏少。

I have a good friend. She is a pretty girl. She has long black hair, two big eyes and a small mouth. Her voice is better. She likes singing very much. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and eat，so she is also fat. She often helps animals . Her name is Luly.