过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;注意文中出现的部分句子错误;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查;请注意分段。
Don't Be Afraid to Say “No” It's not simple as at home in the socciaty.Therefore, we should learn to say no,including when others ask for help in some time.For example,when our classmates ask for leave because of unreasonable reasons and being laze and so on,we must say no.If you say yes,it would do harm to you classmates,instead of being good for them. However,in order to caring other people's heart,we can choic to say tactful words,instead of saying no straithtly. What's more,the reasons we have to say no in some time are as follows.For one thing,we would trap in a trouble if others ask us for a help when we also have to do something and we don't learn to say no.for another,when there are two friends invite us to do a same thing at the same time,we also haven't to say no,we would lost tne two frients possibly.Therefore,we must learn to say no.