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考研作文:人脑和电脑的不同

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:18浏览次数:3134
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作文要求:

写一篇关于电脑和人脑差别的文章。

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300字以内。

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学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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There are three reasons for this. The reasons for this are as follows. The reason for this is obvious. The reason for this is not far to seek. The reason for this is that... There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life. It has the following advantages. It does us a lot of good. It benefits us quite a lot. It is beneficial to us. It is of great benefit to us. Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us. It has more disadvantages than advantages. It does us much harm. The television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching delve- sion. It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible)for sb.to do sth. We think it necessary to do sth. It plays an important role in our life. Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon,computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age. We should take some effective measures. We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties. We should do our utmost in doing sth. We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with. The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it. Some changes have taken place in the past five years. A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications. The computer has brought about many changes in education. Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.

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