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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
上下文衔接稍显不流畅；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。
Nowdays，there is a heated picture in the weixin that has aroused people's attention.As the picture described the parents sitted before the computer and sent email to his child,who is playing comperture game on the upstairs,to have dinner.As for this way to communicate with each other,there are different opinion about it. Some people hold the idea that electronic communaction can replace face-to-face contact.The reason for it is that they think electronic communaction is very convertion and people can communicate with their frends or relationship when and where they want.Others hold the opposite idea.They strongly believe that face-to-face contact is a batter way than contact on internet.Because face-to-face contact might make the communication more eaier and understanding each other more feasible. As far as i am concerned,every coin has two sides,but i agree with laster one.
