高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

My Favrite Sport What sport i like best is playing football. But I falling in love with football by chance.One day , when I got back my home, I Picked a football,and then I play it with my friends,from then on football became my favorite sport. I love back ham who is a professional football player best. And my biggest dream is become a professional football player.