过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;请注意分段。
we should ponder clearly before doing everything, drawing a conclusion is the same. we can't draw aconclusion quickly just after hearing something or seeing something, which may lead to incorrect decision there are three reasons for why we can't draw a concusion quickly without considering. first of all,what we hear or we see may be not the truth but an accident , if conclusion is drawed by this, it will be an error completely. secondly,what we hear or see may be true but not the whole truth. conclusion drawed by this can't be totally correct. at the last, considering is very important because it helps us to rule out wrong information and think out the constant and complete truth. from my perception ,it is unwise to draw a conclusion quickly just after getting some information. we should think about it first
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