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题目:Letter Writing Will Not Be Killed
字数:200满分:100分
作者词汇量积累不错,学术词汇积累较少;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
With the rapid development of technology, more and more people have an idea that phone will kill letter writing in the future. As a matter of fact, the worry is groundless. In my opinion, phones will never kill letter writing, this is impossible. First of all, letters are indirect, which is more convenient in some delicate situation, such as showing your love or your concern, borrowing money, asking for help and so on. Although phone calls have advantages over letter writing, for example, they are much faster when we ask others for help, and people can also hear the voice. But we are afraid of being refused, at this time, letters can do us a favor, because we give the other side time and space to consider and we won’t feel lose our face. Under those situations, we do these things by writing letters can avoid embarrassment and awkwardness, and writing letters is really a good way to solve our problems like these. Secondly, phone calls just last for a few minutes, while letters can be kept for a long time. Just imaging this when you are old, you find some letters in the deepest of the draw and you read them, a lot of beautiful and sweet memories flooding into your mind. Also, we will remember who helped you, who loved you, who concerned you. What an unforgettable feeling it is! And I believe, this feeling is something that you can definitely never experience through several phone calls. All in all, writing letters will never be replaced by phone in people's daily life. It is not just an envelope, but our nice memories. Witting letters are more emotional than phone calls, and it can exist in our whole life and company us forever. I find the statement that phone calls will kill writing letters to be too narrow. It's perhaps more appropriate to say that they supplement each other instead of replacing each other.