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Environment problems do rise human's attention with the quick pace of social development in recent years. The increasing number of forest and animals are vanishing by environment deterioration. However, whether the environment can recover its instinct appearance provided we take some measures timely? In my view, I think we can do some change now to inhibit the environment worsen, that is to say, the best time to preserve the environment do not be missed by now ,and we must do something right now. Firstly, some truths you must know the environment protection can not be finished by one or two days as the destruction of environment is an accumulated processing. So, some improve plans should be listed on paper which can be ensured to accomplished in long term. For example, air pollution ,as all we know, resulted by polluted air released by cars. But we can not live in a life without cars. Some related policies can be made that pirate cars should be appropriately restricted to drive to reduce the releasing of polluted air.For some industries, huge number of polluted water and substances have to be produced all of them finally into environment. For this situation, we can utilize powerful techniques to deal with pollutants to reduce the environment influence of these pollutants. Secondly, as a producer, keeping in mind of the significant of environment preservation is the same important as economy development. So, executive directors should change their mind of only considering benefits but not impose on environment effects. You get the benefits from your products as well as money, and you also should try your best to be responsible for the negative influence raised by your industries. Above all of conclusion, some measures should be taken undoubtfully now. Maybe, we have time to change the deteriorated environment.
