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It is undeniable that human activities have influenced plants and animals badly. Some people believe that it is too late to deal with this problem. But others believe that we can do something to improve this situation. In my opinion, I believe that we can still do something good to solve this problem. We can do something to improve this situation. Nowadays, people have realized that our activities have influenced plants and animals badly. Therefore, people have adopted a more environmental life style than they used to do. For instance, people go to work or school by public transports instead of driving their own car. Besides that, thanks to the advanced technologies, we can apply materials, which can be degraded by earth, into daily life. Furthermore, we have develop our law system and spend lots of money to perfect the protection of animals and plants. Some other people can not agree with that. In the past decades, people have polluted our environment badly, and this situation have never been changed. It is common that people kill some endanger animals for food. But this cruel behavior has never been punished by our law. People also destroy forest to get woods. In this case, the terrible result comes subsequently, the animals lose their home, the earth run off, and the biological systems are totally damaged. But people refuse to change their bad habits. So it is very reasonable for them to think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. In conclusion, although we have big mistakes on plants and animals, I do believe we can take some effective measures to improve this situation.
