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Nowadays, there are many college students order takeout rather than eat in the school’s canteen. Thus, there is a growing concern about it is good for college students to order takeout or eat in the canteen, different people hold different attitudes. Some claim that it is good for college students to order takeout. However, others argue that it is good for college students to eat in the canteen. From my point of view, as a college student, eating in the canteen is good for us. There are many reasons why I prefer eating in the school. On the one hand, eating in the canteen is much cheaper than ordering takeout. Let us take the price as an example, the cheapest dish only needs 1.5 yuan in most university, while you need to pay 8 yuan, at least, for a takeout. In addition, unlike the dirty environment and harmful food of restaurants, it is safer and healthier to eat at school. If there are food safety problems, canteen is more secure than the restaurant. Food safety is an important issue involving our students’ health, which can not be ignored. Last but not least, the meals cooked in the canteen are always more nutritious than restaurants. A particular example for this is that paying the sane money,10 yuan, we can eat at least 3 kinds dishes in the canteen, however, maybe you just can get one dish in a restaurant. On the other hand, there are several disadvantages of ordering takeout. Firstly, even if we are extremely hungry, we have to wait for a long time. Also, we have to urge them constantly in case they forget you, if happens you need to stay a whole afternoon or whole night. What’s worse, sometimes the meal has already chilled when it’s delivered. Secondly, the services of some restaurants are worse than canteen, because their deliverymen’s attitudes are so badly. Finally, takeout will cause white pollution to our campus, which will definitely damage our students’ health. From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that eating in the school’s canteen is much better than ordering a takeout. Only in this way can we keep healthy and prevent pollution. For our health and for our campus’s beauty, don’t call takeout any more!
