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My good friend is li lei .He usually help someone.He teaches me learn english.He like reading book ang watching TV. I went to watch it out of curiosity. I'd say it's really a special art form.Now you two have a safe drive back. I can't tell you how much I enjoyed your staying with us. You're perfect boarders.