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The haze weather Recently,haze weather has become a daily one right here in large part of China.People are forced to wear the mask to avoid breathing poisonous air.So it is necessary to find out the reason why leads to that and work out the resolution.If we trace the cause for haze weather,the main points are as follows,first,china's air quality standards are rather lax and evaluation factors are limited,so you will see that current air appraisal system has defects.Second,some people just go for economic interests instead of turning out products according to relevant law and regulations.They tend to use obsolete equipment in which they are high likely to emit a great deal of wasted air. ,relevant protection awareness has not built up so that people ha vent formed a habit of using green product and saving energy as much as possible. First,we should strengthen air monitor to lower the levels of small particulate pollutants.Second,we should enact more strict laws and regulations and keep perfecting our current law on environmental protection to regulate people's daily action and the industrial production and punish those factories that ignore the protection and keep emitting dangerous material that cause haze. Third,we should develop green and energy-saving energy to lower the emission of haze and improve air quality.As far as I am concerned,if we work together to be able to do such measures,our environment will get better and better and haze weather will vanish completely.
