小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；请注意分段。

My friend is a good boy whose name is Jim. He likes reading and he has read many books. Whatever,he has a good study. And,He has a basketball which gives much happy time to him. I also like playing basketball. Jim likes the basketball very much.One day, I wanted to borrow it, but he did not give me. However, he is my best friend in my life.