希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
My good friend is li lei.He usually helps someone.He teaches me to learn english.He likes reading and watching TV. I went to watch it out of curiosity.Now you two have a safe drive back. I can't tell you how much I enjoyed your staying with us. I speak it very well.