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字数:300 满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;注意文中个别的句子错误;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分学术词汇,单词拼写也要仔细。
More often than not, there is a tendency that a majority of people scrape as many goods as possible whenever they are given a coupons or are meeting a sale. Generally speaking, from where I stand, those who are inclined to this behavior are not as smart as they think themselves to be. Firstly, those so-called discounts seem to be more like a tempt than a sale and the sellers always lure people to continue to purhcase their products, during which time cosumers in fact spend more money than before.Secondly, we must confront with such a difficulty that our room have to stuffed with unnecessary goods in the condition that we often purchase what we aren't really in need of it, resrulting in which it will make our home lood much untidy. In summary, those who are defined as smart consumers have the ablity to consider what they really want reasonably intead of taking their blind eyes to purchase everything.