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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇。
More often than not, there is a tendency that a majority of people scrape as many goods as possible whenever they are given a coupon or are meeting a sale. Generally speaking, from where I stand, those who are inclined to this behavior are not as smart as they think themselves to be. Firstly, those so-called discounts seem to be more like a temptation than a sale and the sellers always lure people to continue to purchcase their products, during which time consumers in fact spend more money than before.Secondly, we must confront with such a difficulty that our room have to be stuffed with unnecessary goods in the condition that we often purchase what we aren't really in need of it, resulting in which it will make our home look much untidier. In summary, those who are defined as smart consumers have the ability to consider what they really want reasonably instead of taking their blind eyes to purchase everything.
