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My best friend is a hard working person. We have friendship about 10 years. She is like all the girls are interested in fashion such like beautiful clothes, but the different is she has a strongly willing to be success in her career. She always put more energy and time in her study and to improve her professional skills. Lots of pressures and expectations she put on her shoulder to push her have a bright and success career in the future.