小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best friend is a hard working person. We have friendship about 10 years. She likes all the girls who are interested in fashion, but the difference is she has a strongly willing to be successful in her career. She always put more energy and time in her study and to improve her professional skills. Lots of pressures and expectations put on her shoulder to make her full of power and energy in her work.