2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但有个别拼写错误；复杂句采用很棒；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；可以适当增加副词的使用。

As is vividly manifested in the illustration above, individuals in all corns of the world are surfing internet, chatting online, purchasing, looking for some relevant knowledge to enhance themselves and watching movie played by their favorite stars and so on. Under the drawing reads 'the far and near of the internet. The potential implication of the cartoon gives an episode of the trmendous influence which internet exerts on our daily life. Undoutly, the internet is playing a unprecedent role in all works of life. For one thing, by virtue of internet, we can communicate and interact with friends and relatives in a far distance which, to varing degrees, bridges the enormous gap beween time and dimention. For another, although the internet facilitates our life and yield a certain dividents, the internet world is a virtual world, which is filled with lies and a host of nasty information which poes a great threat to our survival and growth and put sand in the wheels of future and destiny. It is no exaggeration to say that the internet is gradually becoming a part of our life and lighting our road. Just as any coin has to sides, it is no exception with the issue of internet. Despide of the fact that internet, to some extent, is overwhelmed with our life, the internet exerts tremendous influence on our life. Only that we strike a key balance between the merits and dismerits, is a rational use of internet doomed to generate productive gains for us. How magnificent our life would be did we get access to all valuable things in the internet.