2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

文章用词灵活多样，学术词汇使用也比较准确；句法方面做得很棒，但是从句不多；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；可以适当增加副词的使用。

As is vividly manifested in the illustration above, individuals all over the world are playing computer games.Meanwhile,young and old,rich and poor chat online, purchase, look for some relevant knowledge to enhance themselves and watch the movie played by their favorite stars and so on. Under the drawing says 'the farness and nearness of the internet. The potential implication of the cartoon gives an episode of the tremendous influence which internet exerts on our daily life. Undoutly, the internet is playing a key role in all works of life. For one thing, by virtue of internet, we can communicate and interact with friends and relatives in a remote distance which, to varying degrees, bridges the enormous gap between time and dimension. For another, although the internet facilitates our life and yields great dividends, the internet world is a virtual world, which is filled with lies and a host of detrimental information which poes a great threat to our survival and growth and puts sand in the wheels of our future and destiny. It is no exaggeration to say that the internet is gradually becoming a part of our life and lighting our road. Just as any coin has two sides, it is no exception with the issue of the internet. Despide the fact that internet is overwhelmed with our life, the internet benefits us in a certain way. Only that we strike a reasonable balance between the merits and demerits, is a rational use of internet doomed to generate huge gains for us. How magnificent our life would be did we get access to all valuable things in the internet.