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2002年专业四级英语作文真题:保持健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:17浏览次数:1977
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题目 The Best Way to Stay Healthy
说明 Nowadays people are becoming increasingly aware of the importance of health.  And they have different ways to stay healthy. For example, some exercise every day; others try to keep a balanced diet.  What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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文中词汇使用灵活,学术词汇使用较丰富;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。

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Nowadays, there is a growing concern about more and more people live under a great of pressure in modern society. There are three kinds of pressure working on people today: pressure from education, family and career. It is easy to blame the school for charging too much money, the family members for the heavy burden, and the society for the fierce competition. It is universally acknowledged that there is public perception people should relax. Thus, keeping a good mood is quite important and necessary under whatever circumstances. To begin with, a good mood makes us more efficient during working. A good case in point is that when we are in a good mood, we see the world in a positive way and feel passion and motivation with our work. Besides, we treat the difficulties and problems which exist in our work with hope and confidence. At the same time, when we are working, we are more concentrate on our works. Likewise, whenever we are getting into troubles, we fulfill with motivation and energy. Not only are we able to face up to cruel reality, but also we treat the obstacles more easily than before. Furthermore, we do our work with our whole devotion and solve problems easily. Keeping good mood has positive effects which can be psychological, physical. In addition, good mood also can let a person it not panic during working. Most people would agree that good mood is extremely important to our work, for it is a wealth of our valuable work. it makes you still and warn you don't give up the hope of work even in despair. Another thing is that keeping a good mood helps us establish a sound interpersonal relationship. For one thing, when you are in a good mood, it is certain that you are likely to smile at someone who walking towards you. Of course, they will turn you a smile as well, as you contagious then. Smiling can narrow the distance between both sides, since we are showing our kindness and friendless to them. It goes without saying that positive man are more popular than those who are not. On the contrary, if someone pulls his face and tends to lose temper easily, showing unapproachable, it may interfere with personal relationship. Seeing that we probably far away from him and are not willing to stay with such fellow. Therefore, we can see clearly that a good mood is quite important to us. On account of these, it can be concluded that to be a healthy person physically and psychologically, one should keep a good mood. As long as we possess a good mood in our work and life, there is nothing can trap us down in the society. Those little things may seem relatively insignificant like reading mystery novels, playing volleyball, spending time with family and friends, maintaining your emotional well-being, getting plenty of rest, going fishing, nevertheless, they can help you keep a good mood. There is an old saying that Good mood is a kind good medicine. It not only makes our work efficient, but also helps us in daily life.

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