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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3577
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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请使用灵活多样的词汇表达;从句数量稍显不足,注意增加从句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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The pie chart shows the fast foods that teenagers prefer in the USA. In general, teenagers prefer hamburgers, pizza and French fries. Hamburgers are the most popular food of all, because they account for the largest proportion of the pie chart, at 33 percent. Pizza is the second most popular, and this makes up 26 percent of the total survey. Teenagers also like French fries, which represent 22 percent of the chart. Only 9 and 7 percent of teenagers choose fried chicken and tacos respectively so they are less popular than the first three. The least popular fast food in this survey is sushi. Only 3 percent of teenagers prefer this kind of food.

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