2013年考研英语作文预测话题：诚实

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What is depicted in the painting can be divided into four segments,consisting of several figures alone looking plain,yet push a severe and neglected topic without sympathy to surface—smoking is eroding our life. From the cartoon can we get a magnitude of messages about smoking.In 1994,the yield of cigarette reaches 1.4364 billion,such a staggering and astronomical figure it is,dropped still gradually to 1.42 billion in 1996,which is at least a comparatively good news accounting for our awareness of the damage of smoking,even though mildly.Additionally,What should be paid attention to is the money wasted on producing the waste.In other words, thousands of schools can be born with the fee applied to step by step putting an end to our life,which is supported from the third section, of 3 million humans dying from smoking.