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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3577
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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能较准确地使用学术词汇,还需请作者增加词汇丰富度;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;复杂句采用很棒;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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The chart illustrates the fast food diet structure of the USA teenagers. According to the chart, we can find that hamburgers are the most popular fast food,which occupy nearly one third,while sushi is the least popular fast food(only 3%).The consumption of pizza and french fries account for nearly one half(48%),where the percentage of pizza is 26% and another part is french fries(22%). The remaining part is shared by tacos and fried chicken(7% and 9% respectively)

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