2013年2月2日雅思大作文真题TASK2

文章学术词汇表达灵活，但拼写错误稍多；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Watching TV has been recognized a methond to acquire knowledge effectively by many people,because audio-visual information is able to attract students' attention and cultivate interes of learing easily.Even though there are many advantages about watching TV but it is conceivable that children may not reap benefits from this behavior.Parents and Teachers must think twice before encouraging chidren to watch TV. The first point to note is that watching TV interfers those activities which can help children grow up .It is diffcult for them to undertake interact activities that improve their brain development such as reading singing and communicating.Parients are afraid those children who are watching tv addicts can not focus on their learning task leading their test scores drop. Another question is that children are unable to take part in physical activities if they spend much time on watching TV.It causes childrens' problem of obesity.Obese children probably have negative self-image,it will undermine their confidence and have bad effect on their health. Another critism about watching TV is some program probably include some unwanted content.These cotent will cause some childrens' misbehavior.It is possible that those children who get in touch with violent content may have some aggresive herioc fantasies.Most of the time,the program including violent content is not emphasize that vicitms' panic and criminals' legal responsibilities.This signals to the viewers that violence is a effective methond to solve contradiction without hurt.Therefore those who implement agreesive action may not suffer any bad feeling. To sum up,parents and teachers should impose restriction on watching TV instead of encouraging this habit.This justified by the fact that escessive watching TV can lead a series of problems including inactivity devaint behaviour and intellectual competence.