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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3372
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分89.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇基础扎实。

用户练习作文:

What is depicted in the painting can be divided into four segments,consisting of several figures alone looking plain,yet push a severe and neglected topic without sympathy to surface—smoking is eroding our life. From the cartoon can we get a magnitude of messages about smoking.In 1994,the yield of cigarette reached 1.4364 billion,such a staggering and astronomical figure it is,dropped still gradually to 1.42 billion in 1996,which is at least a comparatively good news accounting for our awareness of the damage of smoking,even though mildly.Additionally,What should be paid attention to is the money wasted on producing the waste.In other words, thousands of schools can be born on the fee applied to step by step putting an end to our life,which is supported from the third section, of 3 million humans dying from smoking,spelling the death,we learn.A considerable group of smoker shown in the last picture indicates cigarette seems to be indispensable and the situation can't turn upside.The rate one in five is so high,isn't it? Heard from the above-mentioned,isn't it high time for us to get stuck in mending the matters?Initially,the yield of cigarette should be put the restraint on in the grip of government.Additionally,some campaigns should be held to advertise the deadly damage of cigarette to enhance civil's conception about health.It is only through these moves that a rosy and nice life will be achieved in the years to come.

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