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2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:42浏览次数:1783
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Advertising which can be seen everywhere in daily life influences what people think is important and has negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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In the last two decades,a large number of advertisements affect every aspect of our lives. Some people claim it influences the people's values and has negative effects. In my perception,it sounds reasonable,but,on the whole,advertising has been also a necessary part of our lives and a useful approach of getting information. Advertisements can sometimes influence the people's judgement about commodities.To some aspect,advertising could mislead consumer to buy something useless.In addition,some advertisements are really annoying.For example,when we concentrated on our assignment by using the computer,the pop-up window always disturb us. On the other hand,the various advertisements have been the most familiar scenery in the city for a long time.The attractive posters and light boxes are exhibiting the creativity of designers and the charm of art in every street.What is more,advertising provide plenty of information.Without advertising,we would miss the fresh and practical commodities. In conclusion,while some advertising mislead the masses for getting more business benefits,more advertisement have remarkable advantages .According to me,I believe advertisement is necessary in our lives,and get better prospects in the future.

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