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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3372
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分88.5分
评语:

作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;可增加从句和复杂句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

As is illustrated in the drawing,separated individuals who enjoy the Internet accesses are connected with each other through the spider web like information super highway.But meanwhile,each of them is confined to a small cell and attached to the laptop before they can get into touch with others. At first sight,every one can chat,communicate and make friends with others by means of the powerful Internet links.It is extraordinary convenient for Internet users to transfer information in various forms because people are just a click away.However,under the surface of this amazing closeness created by the "cyber space" is the ever extending distance in reality.While people are indulging in the convenience and entertainment brought about by the Internet,sitting all day long in front of a screen all alone,they are virtually driving away their intimate family,friends and real life.The time with parents is replaced by aimless chatting with a total stranger;Space for hanging out and bonding with real life friends is roughly occupied by endless Internet games.Indeed,the Internet has greatly facilitated our communication and thus improved efficiency in governments,business,and schools.Yet an inconvenient fact has emerged:at personally level,many people have got addicted to the Internet by immersing in the virtual space and shutting the real world out all together. Judging from all evidence offered,we may safely come to the conclusion that the Internet is both a blessing and a curse.It is up to the users to strike a balance between the merits and drawbacks and make good use of the Internet resources to their favor.

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