Ms. Vacirca is a sweet woman with a sense of humor that you just have to laugh at. When regents were approaching, she was more concerned than ever about everyone doing well. Many of her precious students scored high, and so she expected the same from us. Day after day there were students in the classroom reviewing problems. When it was time for our big test, I knew I was ready. I walked out of that test with my head high. I knew that I was a success and Ms. Vacirca had made me that way. I appreciated all the hard work that she put into helping me and my fellow students. I knew that I would miss her.
c.我将如何回报老师的关爱。
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Ms Vacirca, a caring, determined, humorous math teacher, though with a bit nag, was very strict with her students but respected and loved by all of them. All her students, especially the author, learned much and progressed rapidly owing to her hard work and concern. Teaching is the most glorious and respectable career. On teacher’s Day, I’d like to express my innermost appreciation and gratefulness to all the teachers in the world! I still remember how my teachers pulled me through a critical moment. I did a bad job in the first mock test and I was considerably depressed. Then my teachers came to my rescue. Patiently, my English teacher analyzed the paper word by word and encouraged me to carry on. My chemistry teacher also gave me a precious gift. He told me not to be obsessed with the test results and encouraged me to find fun in learning. Their help will enable me to survive the competition and surely benefit me in the future. Perhaps I’ll never have a chance to repay all that I have received from my teachers. But I’ll try to be a useful person and become their pride.