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文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；使用了个别复杂句，但文中错误句子较多。
Should experience be credited with more importance than books as some people claim? Or do books still play a pivotal role in the learning process? Given my personal experience, I agree with the former. 许多人说经验比书本知识更重要，真是这样吗？书本是否在学习阶段扮演着重要的角色呢？我认为，我同意前者的观点。无可否认，学生能够从书本上学习到所有必须的原理。书籍应该含有某一领域的精髓，书籍非常重要，原因在于所有的教学机构都会利用书籍来传播知识。但是，人们也不应该轻视实践的重要性。在许多情况下，经验比书籍还要重要，然而，这样的趋势正在不断增长。雇主希望未来的雇员拥有大量的工作经验，这样，他们就不用从头学起。此外，有大量知识是不能够仅仅通过书本来获取的，任何教育的根本目标都是传授知识，并培养学生把知识运用到真实情况的能力。学习书本的理论知识就相当于没有掌握，情况是，如果学生不能够运用知识来解决工作中的问题。最后，不可避免的是，在传播知识上，书籍是至关重要的载体；但是，经验也非常重要。 Admittedly, students can learn all the necessary principles or theorems through textbooks. And a high-quality book should contain the essence of a certain subject, The importance of books is corroborated by the fact that almost all learning institutions employ textbooks to disseminate knowledge. Nonetheless, one should not belittle the significance of hands-on experience. In some circumstances, experience may count more than books and this trend is gradually gaining ascendancy. It makes sense that employers expect their prospective staff a to acquire some experience so that they do not have to learn from scratch. In addition, it is true to assert that there are a myriad of things which cannot be learned simply by reading a book, The underpinning goal of any education is to impart knowledge and to cultivate the ability to apply the knowledge to a real-life situation. Principles learned from books amount to almost nothing if students cannot use them to solve problems they encounter in their jobs. Finally, it is undeniable that books are a useful device in terms of conveying knowledge; however, the importance of experience should not be underrated either. 无可否认，学生能够从书本上学习到所有必须的原理。书籍应该含有某一领域的精髓，书籍非常重要，原因在于所有的教学机构都会利用书籍来传播知识。但是，人们也不应该轻视实践的重要性。在许多情况下，经验比书籍还要重要，然而，这样的趋势正在不断增长。雇主希望未来的雇员拥有大量的工作经验，这样，他们就不用从头学起。此外，有大量知识是不能够仅仅通过书本来获取的，任何教育的根本目标都是传授知识，并培养学生把知识运用到真实情况的能力。学习书本的理论知识就相当于没有掌握，情况是，如果学生不能够运用知识来解决工作中的问题。最后，不可避免的是，在传播知识上，书籍是至关重要的载体；但是，经验也非常重要。 On balance, I believe that books and experience actually complement each other: knowledge learn.ed throughbooks will be effectively reinforced by the accumulation of experience.
