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My friend jack, who is come from America, and he will come my hometown to see me next week. I am very happy to have this news. I am going to go ShaoLin temple with him when he arrive. The ShaoLin temple is very famous temple in the world. Especially its ShaoLin kungfu is known by lots of people in the world. and many people like ShaoLin kungfu, they study and exercise it every day, that can improve their physical quality, meantime, that can defend theirselives.I think that jack is got to like it.I hope he will have a good tripe in my hometown.
