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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;连词使用偏少。
Dears sir, Liming,who is singel man,is 28 years old.He graduates from english daparture of North Uninvesity in july ,2008.During college , not only has a stronger hearing and reading of english ,but also has excellent garde in subject. Secondly,in the school in where prosess ability in basic german.Others,he has process of foreign trade. He likes playing basketball,singing and flim who want to foreign trade man. Li ming