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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17596
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

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文中词汇使用灵活,学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,另外请认真检查词汇的拼写;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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There are alsways some debats about weather we should trust our snap judgements or not. Frankly speaking, it might be higly probable wrong, if we know little about the subject that we need give judgments. But it is too extreme to state that snap judgments can never be trusted. In my perspectives, accumulated knowledges and luck both can help us make a correct decision resulting from a snap judgment. On the one hand, we are used to access to lots of knowledges every day. That is not too abtract to be aware of that we, sometimes, incorporate our accumulated knowledges into our subconcious behaviors. That means we don't hesitate but we can still get a thoughtful judgement. As we know, human brain is a very complex system, which we can never explain the detailed process how it works. Therefore, it may have a mechanism to reflect our knowledges accumulations into judgements leading us to an right direction. Take my major as an illustration. I have studied accounting for three years. At present, when I happen to review a listed manufacturing company which is totally unfamiliar with me, I believe that I can tell you where could be wrong just according to my snap judgment. But I find it's hard to tell you the exact reasons why I cast doubts on some certain transactions. It just a feeling waiting to be checked out. Fortunately, I am usually right. On the other hand, nobody can deny there is a possibility if we just guess. Maybe our supporting thesis is wrong from head to toe, however we are lucy to be right. For example, everyone could have experienced exams. We often come to mutiple choices questions without knowing exact answer. So, what are we going to do next? Obviously- guess. To some extent, we have to do it based on exam strategy. But at that time, I think we do trust our snap judgments and we still have chances to score. So you can never say snap judgment could be never trusted. Admittedly, its conceivable that we should make a decision in reference to adequate preparetions or analyses. But there are always some exceptions we must take into account. Otherwise, we may missconduct due to hesitations.

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